Monday, 21 March 2016

Swimming Sports




On Friday of week five our class and room five went to Midland Line swimming. We all did really well and the school was proud off us.  

Then some of us got told that we qualified for West Coast Swimming, we were really excited about it. There were nine of us going: Sarah, Katie, Georgia, Jade, Ashleigh, Blake, Myah, Nicole from our class room which we were proud off. There was one boy from room five, Harrison who did extremely well to get in because he is a year five. We all did extremely well and the school was proud off us.

6 comments:

  1. Wow great recount I like the way you explained the text properly,next time try editing some komas.

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  2. Hi room six,

    I love your story about swimming sports,
    I was just wondering if thats your school pool or a local pool.

    From grace
    Rimu class
    Yaldhurst school

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  3. Hi Room 6,

    Is the picture of the pool that you’ve put on the post your school pool? Just wondering.
    Yeah, we had swimming sports a few weeks ago too,

    Ariana,
    Rimu class

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  4. Dear year 6,

    Wow I love reading your new blog comment. They are interesting and cool, Would you do them again or not? You explained it very well and Good spelling. Did you have fun or not?

    From Violet. Bye

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  5. Hi Room 6,

    It is great that you all did well, especially for the people that qualified for West Coast Swimming.
    My school did swimming sport about 3 weeks ago, and 8 including myself qualified for zones.
    We don't know our placings yet.
    Do you know what you guys came?

    -Nikita
    Yaldhurst Model School
    Christchurch
    New Zealand

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  6. I like your pool because it is inside, it's heated and it has lanes. Have you seen our school pool?

    Hunter
    Yaldhurst

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